Tuesday, November 25, 2008

The Monsters of the 19th Century

“The industrialists of the last quarter of the 19th century were visionaries rather than 'robber barons'." This statement could not be any further from the truth; in fact it is the polar opposite. The industrialists were money hungry, condescending, manipulative monsters. They were terrible people with no morals.
A perfect example of the terrible robber barons is John D. Rockefeller. He was in the oil refining business, and believed that it was disorganized because of competition among the thousands of small producers and refiners. Rockefeller decided to gain control of more then 90 percent of the nation’s refining business; he practically had a monopoly on oil. He used the rebate to his advantage, his company promised to allow certain railroads to do all their shipping if the railroads agreed to charge him 25 to 50 percent less then they charged everyone else. He also asked railroads to give him information about his competitors (when and where their shipments were going.) This gave him a huge but completely unfair advantage over the few small companies that remained, he was able to ship his oil before the others. Standard oil (Rockefeller’s firm) used horizontal and vertical integration by allying with the strongest companies in the industry. He combined 40 companies under a single management and he took control of the oil fields providing Standard Oil their own supply of natural gas, he eliminated the competition leaving only profit for himself, because everyone had to buy from Standard Oil. He forced so many people into unemployment; Rockefeller had too much money and power, a bad combination. Because of his shrewd business tactics Rockefeller became “one of the most hated men in America” (American History The Modern Era Since 1865 page 279.)
Andrew Carnige was equally as evil. He pushed many small iron and steel manufacturers out of business by using the Bessemer and open-hearth process (two ways of making steel.) These new methods of creating the alloy required large amounts of coke and ore to keep them going. In just 20 short years Carnegie was the greatest steel maker in the world. He surrounded himself with smart men who discovered by-products could be used, got low grade ores and could determine how much it would cost to produce a ton of steel. He said he “was smart enough to surround himself with men far cleverer then himself.” The knowledge these men provided him with allowed Carnegie to sell his product at lower prices then his competitors and still make a profit. He also used vertical integration to his advantage he combined everything that had to do with making steel (Iron ore deposits, steel mills, blast furnaces and fleets of ships to transport the ore) into one. These are only two of the many economic terrorists from the 19th century. They were engaged in many practices that would be considered illegal by today’s standards. They had unsafe work environments, shut down labor unions, allowed child labor, evaded taxes, devastated the environment and owned monopolies. These crooks were not visionaries but terrible men with no self-control; they only cared about the money and power not those they hurt. While these wealthy families lived in their elegant homes hard working families were out on the streets, begging and wondering how they were going to support themselves. Although some say Rockefeller and Carnegie lived the American dream, in a way they killed it. By gaining so much power over industry they destroyed the chances of smaller business “making it big.” Without competition there was no room for improvement. Their business’s crashed when their tactics were exposed. They became hated men and remain a symbol of what greed, money and power can do to a person, how it can strip a man of his morals, his compassion for others and his reasoning, how it can make people so blind that they only see their profit and not the suffering of others.

8 comments:

E-Lo said...

Hey I remeber this assaignment... I agree that they were monsters, and I cannot understand how Mr. Fereer likes them... Great essay!!!

Dominic said...

Yeah, go straight for a pre-written essay will you? Any who, I understand your dislike for these "monstrous" businessmen, but I think that you go a little to far in calling them evil. These men brought the modern age upon the United States regardless of their shrewd business tactics. Without these "robber barons", the oh so "great" nation (as we like to call it) may have maintained the under privileged little brother of the European giants. The men who treated the low class Americans as though they were dirt saved them from a potential life of foreign suppression by moving U.S.A's reliance on Europe for manufactured goods and fuels to just the opposite situation where Europe relied on the States. The Same thing has happened today with China. Many say that China is a product of western influence and so it is. The Chinese are doing to us what the robber barons did to Europe those many years ago. Who is to say that this grand little transfer of power is bad. A starving nation works for food while a satisfied nation only buys it. The robber barons were the men who equipped the under payed Americans with the ability, as a nation, to feed their hunger just as China is working to put their country at the top of the list.

Dominic said...

Oh, forgot to say that you should look into a different background color...the black on white combination was really messing with my eyes.

D.L.

Unknown said...

hmm, from what the others have said, this is a pre-written essay... sounds a bit like cheating to me, anyways... Interesting viewpoint on Carnagie and Rockerfeller, I disagree with you as to their "evilness" for many reasons, however DL got here before me and summed up most of them, I'll have to try to be faster next time. I personally think of their business tactics as shrewd and efficient, and also, "The American Dream" is to hit it big, but no one ever realizes that NO ONE can benefit, without another's suffering. If they had not done what they did, than someone else would have achieved the "American Dream" and everyone would be blaming them as evil for putting the rest of the competition out of business.

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Unknown said...

oh, and I would like to second the motion for the background colors, its a nice color combination, but its a tad difficult to read, maybe just try a bigger font

Holly said...

I'm not sure if these men are truly evil, or if they are just really really smart with money. They do come off really evil and selfish when they have to tear everyone else down so that they can have success.

Mrs. Silveira said...

What about the Philanthropy that these men did? Without their support of teh arts, our cultural life wouldn't have been so rich.

I think comments that discuss specific word choice is excellent. Stay away from generic praise.